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4 Divorces 8 Kids

Who hasn't had a starter marriage? Did we learn anything? Does it matter?

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Week #1 Show Teaser 4 Divorces 8 Kids

Any relation to people I know is like, you know, not true. The show is about divorce, marriage, children and experiences. The great and funny world we all live in and share.

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Forman H. 1  posted 4 years ago

Family is a classic mode for sit coms, so that's good, but there is no evidence that you have put any effort into creating the characters necessary for quality comedy. In addition your use of stock photos is beyond cheezy, its just really bad form.

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    Christina O. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Is the synopsis meant to be a poem or something. I'm not sure about you but I saw way more than 8 kids, I'm not following this title...

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    Sheldon O. 0  posted 4 years ago

    The name and idea was good, the teaser did not deliver though on what potentially could have been

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    Forman H. 1  posted 4 years ago

    Family is a classic mode for sit coms, so that's good, but there is no evidence that you have put any effort into creating the characters necessary for quality comedy. In addition your use of stock photos is beyond cheezy, its just really bad form.

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    Gilbert M. 1  posted 4 years ago

    Know so many people in this type of situation. Lot's of potential and should gain a fan base.

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