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The question you have to ask is, "What would you do, if you were fireproof?"

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Week #1 Show Teaser Fireproof

Why is Jock plotting revenge? Most eligible retirees can't wait to leave work. Stay tuned at CBC @ComedyCoup and @FireproofComedy #Vote and Tell us you #FireproofStory!

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Jamie Anne C. 2  posted 5 years ago

Brilliant writing, well produced, hilarious concept. I hope this gets off the ground!

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Building relationships with the local South Korean community. What could go wrong?
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Receptionist in Training

How far can Jock push this new employee? Vote for @FireproofComedy to find out!
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Jock is Fireproof

Jock is Fireproof

We all long for the ability to retire however, Jock has other plans. If YOU were Fireproof, what would you do to exact revenge on your coworkers? Tell us @FireproofComedy! #fireproofstory
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    Jon T. 0  posted 5 years ago

    Good concept for a youtube series. I could see that being pretty catchy in short doses. The things he does at work need to be set up a bit better though, I chuckled at those, but the moments could have been stretched out and crafted a bit better. But funny idea and title!

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    Sheldon O. 0  posted 5 years ago

    Great title, what's the reason he's fireproof, like the dark humour too

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    Aj L. 0  posted 5 years ago

    Lol.

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    david a. 0  posted 5 years ago

    come on nb,THINK

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    Greg W. 1  posted 5 years ago

    David A, (Kevin P, Jane D in the ratings) Thank you for your comments. We were all well aware that the teaser was pushing the limits and wasn't for everyone. If we didn't make the teaser that way, we were concerned that Fireproof idea would be blending in with the crowd.

    Without giving away too many details, be assured that we will be addressing the feedback that has been given. And please remember that our team wants you to love the Fireproof and the cast of characters that we have cooked up! We just haven't been given a chance to show you that side yet! =) Stay tuned!

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    Jamie Anne C. 2  posted 5 years ago

    Brilliant writing, well produced, hilarious concept. I hope this gets off the ground!

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    Julius M. 0  posted 5 years ago

    Thanks! We've got a lot more to the characters and storyline than we have revealed so far. Look forward to sharing that with you all!

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    Greg W. 1  posted 5 years ago

    Thanks Jamie Anne. We hope it gets off the ground too! Thank you for the support!

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    Dan N. 2  posted 5 years ago

    One of the best story concepts I've seen so far. Scale back on the vulgarity a bit and you've got something. Edgy doesn't mean crass. You've got this.

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    Julius M. 0  posted 5 years ago

    Thanks Dan! When I signed up to work on this project, it was an idea I had never seen on TV before. Your feedback is much appreciated!

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    Greg W. 0  posted 5 years ago

    Thanks for the feedback Dan. You've been heard!

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    Rodney R. 1  posted 5 years ago

    How do you rub one out in 2 minutes? It takes that long just to remember what my kindergarden teacher looked like. Mr. Pelly and I were close. Check out Famous Last Words!

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    Julius M. 0  posted 5 years ago

    The secret? Jergens. I just watched your teaser! I'm going to be looking over my shoulder the next time I'm in Montreal. Good luck guys! Great work!

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    Greg W. 0  posted 5 years ago

    Are you asking literally or figuratively? =)

    I'll check out Famous Last Words this morning over a coup of coffee!

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    Cat L. 1  posted 5 years ago

    Excellent writing and acting, keep it up :)

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    Greg W. 0  posted 5 years ago

    Thanks Cat. We've been asked to be #UnExpected and to aim for mature audience. I believe that we have delivered on that promise.

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    Jack H. 0  posted 5 years ago

    Prime time? Uh no. Crossed the line into late night.

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    Greg W. 0  posted 5 years ago

    Thanks for the feedback Jack. Please remember that it's a teaser and not a final product.

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    Jonathan S. 1  posted 5 years ago

    This is funny stuff. A couple of scenes really cross some lines. That concept is great.

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