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Campus Law

Refusing to let go of their wild college years, three friends work as security guards on campus.

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Week #5 Hype It Campus Law

Campus Law is a hilarious new television show created by Montreal-based sketch group Moving Mind Studio. After creating online sketch comedy videos together for over four years and generating millions of views, they're finally ready to make the leap to the world of TV!

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Darcy W. 5  posted 4 years ago

Great job again this week guys! Your years of experience and production value is evident each week and I love the show concept! Nothing really constructive to say other than show me more! Hopefully see you on the other side next week!
Darcy - WingMom.ca

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A RUN-IN WITH THE LAW: ON THE WEB

A RUN-IN WITH THE LAW: ON THE WEB

Just because you don't live in Montreal, doesn't mean you can't party with Campus Law!
On Thursday, November 6th at 9pm, join us online for a LIVE YOUTUBE HANGOUT and ask us all your juicy questions over a virtual beer!
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A RUN-IN WITH THE LAW: IN PERSON

A RUN-IN WITH THE LAW: IN PERSON

Join us at McLean's pub (1210 Peel, Montreal) starting at 6pm on Sunday, November 9th for a Campus Law get-together! Come have a drink with us, and have the chance to win some fun Campus Law prizes, just for showing up!

You can even stick around for a live stand-up comedy show, starting at 9PM!
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GET IN TOUCH

GET IN TOUCH

For any media inquiries or BURNING questions you may have about Campus Law, contact us at campuslawofficial@gmail.com, or through social media @CampusLawTV!
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Moving Mind Studio

Moving Mind Studio

We're Moving Mind Studio, the creators of Campus Law!
We've been making comedy videos together since 2010, and we don't ever plan on stopping. Our dedication to making funny and high-quality videos has gathered over 8 million views on YouTube and helped develop a fan-base of some of the most amazing people in the world. We'd love for you to get to know us a little better and check out our previous work over at http://youtube.com/MovingMindStudio !
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  • Karen's Photo
    Karen H. 0  posted 4 years ago

    GOOD LUCK!!! See you on here tomorrow :D

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    Jeremy A. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Great video like always guys. Loved the foot-five and Richard jokes. I have no doubt you'll be in the top 15 so here's hoping we'll see you there! - The Ninja

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    ron s. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Real cool stuff, gotta check out your non comedy coup related videos. This show has mad potential

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    Laura e. 0  posted 4 years ago

    I really liked it too, very unique

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    Caster T. 0  posted 4 years ago

    This is really funny stuff. Glad that you guys showed us how the show would play out and have the characters be this great and funny. Good job.

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    Adam P. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Thank you! Man, most of the other hype-it videos really missed the mark, but you guys nailed it. It was on-point, informative for the press, professional, well-shot, and funny. That Richard joke was solid and I like what you guys do.

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    Robbie C. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Great job making top 55, There is some stiff competition out there and more than a few laughs. I think you will be in the Top 15 ! Good luck

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    Mike F. 0  posted 4 years ago

    I respect your authority and also your comedy chops and also your production quality and also (certainly at the top of this strange list) your intention to include an Edgar Wright tone into your work. STOKED 4 U

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    Trikucian J. 0  posted 4 years ago

    I just figured out why I like you guys so much, you're like the new 21 Jump Street, but Canadian!

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    Brandon L. 1  posted 4 years ago

    This is one of my favourite groups by far, you guys are funny so I wish you luck with the top 15

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    Starla B. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Could totally see this show reaching the younger viewer - late teens to late 20's. In reality - no one really wants to grow up, perhaps your characters have the rabbit hole to hold on to their youth. Good luck.

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    Matt W. 0  posted 4 years ago

    You guys definitely have a lot of chemistry and one of my favorite concepts in the entire competition as well. Sincerely wish you the best of luck and were all watching. From your friends at The Lease.

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    Satheesan N. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Very good concept. Like the chemistry you three have and I think that's what will make this series great. Hope you guys make it to the next round.

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    Ryan C. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Very good acting and great production value. Definitely one of the top 15 videos on here. Good luck in the next round!

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    Edward T. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Another impressive and entertaining video. You guys continue to be one of the top groups in this competition. I'd be shocked if you don't make top 15.

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    Jezza B. 0  posted 4 years ago

    This has the potential to be really good but i'm afraid it will just be another douche humour type of comedy. I think Seth Rogen has given us a lifetime's worth of that... let's hope you prove me wrong though. Best of luck in the rest of the competition!

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    Keith H. 0  posted 4 years ago

    bike cops are just funny to begin with. Congratulations on making it to the Top 55 and good luck on making it to the Top 15!

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    William M. 0  posted 4 years ago

    not my thing i dont think, a strong team but a bit of a repetitive edge to the humor youre trying to impart. im not sure its all that intelligent at times, not to say that its gotta be, but throw some in for a good mix

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    Mark R. 0  posted 4 years ago

    I agree with the comments below. You guys are the funniest and one of the best... hope you make it to the top 15. Very funny videos and ideas. The acting and production is so well done!

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    Stephen P. 0  posted 4 years ago

    You guys are one of the strongest teams out there. Very funny and well produced content. Your team video was the best of the competition. Good luck moving up!

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    Ryan G. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Thanks Stephen!

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    Morgan R. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Good Job Guys keep it up and you'll be top 15 for sure!!!! Really funny stuff! Can't wait to see more!

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    Chris M. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Pretty damn funny, can't wait to see what else comes out of this.

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    Erin H. 0  posted 4 years ago

    The projects coming out of Montreal are seriously bringing their A-game. Good job on the consistently high production value guys! I hope to see you in the top 15!

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    Ryan G. 0  posted 4 years ago

    We're proud to be repping Montreal amongst those other teams, they're cold-stone pros!

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    Dennis O. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Laughing out loud! I worked 15 years for the Campus Law myself. This is the first video I have seen of yours and I totally get it and totally like it AND totally see the potential! You guys all have great comic acting chops. I would totally watch this and would love to consult even. I hope you make it to the top 15.

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    Ryan G. 0  posted 4 years ago

    We'd love to hear some of your stories!

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    Alice B. 0  posted 4 years ago

    i will agree with stephanie C, i think that it would be a good think to step out of the caricatures . i also though that in some of your video s the female characters are presented like they are a bit dum are have no personality and i find it offensive

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    Ryan G. 1  posted 4 years ago

    That's an interesting interpretation.. Our three protagonists are written as the most clueless characters in the room in every situation we've presented them in - is there a specific scene that you could point out that made you feel otherwise?
    Thanks for the comment!

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    Keith B. 1  posted 4 years ago

    My Top 15 Picks are (in alphabetical order):

    Bad Records
    Bike Cops
    Blackwater Records
    Buddy Guys
    Campus Law
    Dead Air
    Dope Ass World
    Graham Clark: Wilderness Man
    Heir Heads
    HumanTown
    Infinite Possibilities
    Jobless
    One Night Only
    Welcome to Tulip
    Wharf Rats

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    Rob S. 0  posted 4 years ago

    I like the project, the way the video keeps moving and the talent. Good premise, different setting and ripe with a lot of comic potential. This is worth a top 15, in my opinion.

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    Gary D. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Yes I agree with the below commentor. This will be very popular with the High School kids. There are so many areas to explore your ideas in this college setting. Good work and good luck

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    Stephanie C. 0  posted 4 years ago

    I can see this being really popular, especially among a certain demographic of young people. I think if you get a little more clever and natural and a little less act-y and obvious, it will appeal to an ever broader audience. It's not my favourite... but I am entertained. Good luck guys.

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    John D. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Looks good guys, Love the premise (but then I run security on a university campus) look forward to seeing more with this and will be looking for more of your stuff outside of the coup.

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    matt e. 0  posted 4 years ago

    you guys look like a bunch of nice dudes, and it feels good to laugh with y'all. i would even like to have a beer with you. there's a good sheen to the finished products you have but it doesnt hype me out, i think there's a bit of reality missing! no subtext

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    Bobby A. 0  posted 4 years ago

    your stuff is funny and sleek but it just feels a bit bland and unoriginal. it reminds me of old school or animal house in terms of its concept and the polished shine of the clips feels too insincere to me. thats just my opinion though.

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    Brandon C. 0  posted 4 years ago

    You guys do have great chemistry, however I really think you need to work on your "camera" acting. It's very theatrical, which is great for your broad jokes, however you are missing out on the subtleties of the characters you have created. If this is a character based comedy as you've described to each of your strengths then you should be aware of your weaknesses. Good luck

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    Rob S. 0  posted 4 years ago

    you guys are top-rate, first-class professionals, and it really shows. the sell sheet is bang-on and the video looks awesome. however...it is a little bit TOO sleek and polished, too overproduced for me. i like the videos that seem like their creators have to work hard to do what they do. you guys seem like you can just film anything with your fancy schmancy gear and itll turn out nice. but thats not your fault i guess.

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    Ryan G. 2  posted 4 years ago

    Well I guess it's a compliment that we seem to have fancy schmancy gear, because we're really working with the bare minimum and zero budget. It's just important to us to take the time to set things up and look as nice as we can make them.The "polish" you're talking about comes from hard work and very little sleep. Thanks for the comment!

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    Aaron P. 0  posted 4 years ago

    So if my team gets booted I promise to vote for you under one condition: you need to write a seven episode arc all about the dangers of butt chugging. My pitch: the Campus Law team goes undercover in an illegal buttchugging ring run out of the Dean's Office. Two of the three guys get laid out with alcohol poisoning immediately. It's gold!

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    Connie S. 0  posted 4 years ago

    the funny part is that all security guards think they're cops, great concept

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    Catherine w. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Great work! Hope You guys make it all the way!!

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    Pierre-Luc B. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Great, as always!

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    Deanne F. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Nice work!

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    Stefan P. 0  posted 4 years ago

    what's up turkey burgers, great work I think this project is like a really sweet RPG, point it, pull the trig trig and everything blows up. Into funny interesting stuff. KAPLOW! That's a sweet hoodie. It would look great crumpled up on my bedroom floor. For when you guys come to visit. I have a 1 1/2, the bedroom is the kitchen and the office and the tv room and where I keep all my stickers. Great work!

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    Seigfred P. 0  posted 4 years ago

    So creative, this project is unique to me I think. I'm not going to be one of those people who try to give you guys hints or tell you how to do your work, it's all compliments from me! I love the whole concept of this project, like I've said before very creative and funny! And as long as you have at least one of those you guys will make it far in this competition, and you guys have both! So best of luck, looking forward to seeing more.

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    David N. 0  posted 4 years ago

    I like the premise of guys sticking around and being security guards at their college so they can continue to party. Also I think the production quality is very good and among the best of the videos I have seen. I don't think it's hilarious but it's not bad as far as comedy goes. Good stuff.

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    Gregory B. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Really like the concept ... who doesn't want their College experience to last forever. Ok, rethink that, who doesn't want to get paid to attend a College party. Maybe not ... but there in lies the fun I guess. I don't like cops making fools of themselves (sorry bike cops) but Campus Cops are ok ... lol

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    Rick H. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Where do you keep your costumes when you are not filming? Or do they have a life of their own and just fight crime while you sleep? Just wondering...

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    Orlando B. 0  posted 4 years ago

    congratulations on making it to the top 55! You three look like you are having so much fun on screen - I really hope to see you in the top 15!

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    Greg B. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Looks like you've got some connections and experience, that's what I gathered from your hype video. You seem natural in front of the camera. Haven't seen your other stuff yet but will look further as I think you might have something here.

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    Elaine I. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Good work on the video for this week's mission. Also, your sell sheet is awesome. It looks super sharp and has all the information you could want! Nice work!

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    Kevin S. 0  posted 4 years ago

    This clip filled my viewing time for the last 90 seconds plus the additional 15 seconds of CBC filler.

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    Jessica P. 0  posted 4 years ago

    wow guys! your sell sheet looks amazing! probably the best one i've seen so far. you guys seem really into this competition and your dedication shows. keep up the great work

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    Josianne a. 0  posted 4 years ago

    one of the team to beat in this competition, thats for sure.
    Great video. Great editing, i like the rhythm.
    Funny, as usual!
    GOOD LUCK!

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    Geoff R. 0  posted 4 years ago

    I'm sure you guys don't need to hear any feedback, but ya'll are some talented mothaf**kas! Funny, and charming, and the video quality is near perfect! Still, not at all convinced on your premise, not interested in seeing the story play out. But on the flip side of that, Workaholics is a very weak premise and those guys made a great show. All the best going forward!

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    Jenna B. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Congratulations on finishing the video for this week and good luck in all your missions in the future.

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    Mariana V. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Wow, I can't believe I haven't heard of you guys before! You have a personal and smart sense of comedy. The shoe-high-five and twist on "finish each other's sentences" tickled me. Good luck!

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    Ryan G. 0  posted 4 years ago

    We aim to tickle people professionally one day, so that's great to hear. Thanks for your comment!

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    Karen B. 0  posted 4 years ago

    I've been really enjoying your weekly submissions, but I've got to tell you, I thought this week's fell short of the mark and certainly short of what you've done so far. Too editorial for my liking.

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    Ryan G. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Glad you've been enjoying the submissions!
    We did choose to go a more editorial route for this video, since the mission was to present the show to journalists. Next week's video is 100% giggles though- stay tuned!

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    Adam L. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Another solid entry, not the funniest you've done but I'll bet it will be successful as a marketing tool. You guys are funny. If this show gets made I'll definitely tune in. Good Luck!

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    Ryan G. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Thanks Adam L.!

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    Julie G. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Great video, very polished. Nice seeing how you guys work so well together on and off the camera. Good luck with the rest of the competition!

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    Ryan G. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Thank you Julie!

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    Jeremy A. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Well done keeping this week real while infusing natural humour along the way, we tried to achieve the same thing in ours but I think you pulled it off better. I think you're a shoe-in for top 15 so here's hoping we'll be there next to you!

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    Ryan G. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Thanks Jeremy! I hope we will hold hands and walk together into the beautiful Top 15 sunset.

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    Jesse P. 1  posted 4 years ago

    I've definitely seen better. I've definitely seen worse. 'Nuff said.

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    Ryan G. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Same here!
    To be fair, that comment kind of applies to everything except the BEST thing you've seen and the WORST thing you've seen. It's a solid comment that I will now incorporate into my everyday life.

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    Kristyna A. 0  posted 4 years ago

    I really like how you guys talked about your experience and how that lead to the 3 separate characters that draw on your individual strengths. This is a great project. Good luck in the vote!

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    Courtney S. 0  posted 4 years ago

    I love this concept - and your hype video has convinced me that this team has the experience and skill set required to take this project to the next level! Looking forward to seeing what happens next.

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    Jordana H. 0  posted 4 years ago

    I could actually see this as a TV show, it looks like there's a lot of potential for comedy. You guys have been doing a good job so far, keep up the good work!

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    Confiance N. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Good job guys in explaining what you are doing, and who you are; you guys make a great team together. You have done great so far, and i wish you good luck with your next video and your hype it event. Cheers!

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    Sharleen P. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Very well done, relating to the college crowd. Great chemistry between the actors and I love the concept. Did an awesome job hyping the video to the media!

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    lorien m. 0  posted 4 years ago

    This is funny.

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    Marilyn G. 0  posted 4 years ago

    You guys always have polished videos and now that I see your hype it I realize how successful you have been. I would be disappointed if you weren't doing this well with the success you have had in the field already. Best of luck in top 15!

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    Cat M. 0  posted 4 years ago

    I think your Hype video hit the mark. Good job! If you make it I hope you have some female characters too. (Not just 'props', ya hear....but actual ladies. We heart comedy too!)

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    Richard R. 1  posted 4 years ago

    I'm the one freaked out person. Cool idea, good luck!

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    Debbie O. 0  posted 4 years ago

    I'm so glad to see that this category of the Hype Video is included as part of this contest. As any viewer can plainly see, the past comedy videos, which are briefly shown, and that this team has produced, can only serve as a testament to what Campus Law will bring. Their chemistry as a trio cannot be matched. You guys HAVE to be chosen as part of the Top 15...and eventually NUMBER 1 !

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    Stephany C. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Hey guys, this video truly showed us what to expect from all of you. I don't know about everyone else but I am psyched to see what comes next! All of your expertise are really coming through! Good luck in the next round!

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    Kajetan K. 0  posted 4 years ago

    You guys bring it every time! Best of luck with top 15, You really nailed the Hype Video, I think this week had the most strong entries for sure. You were defs one of em

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    Joseph P. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Nice work - if you ever need someone from Southern Ontario to act as an overage foreign exchange student on campus I'm your guy. In the meantime, if we need party animal security dudes on Fruit Farm, I know exactly who to call! Nice job, best of luck this weekend.

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    Sue D. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Great hype-it video! You've really sold me on the concept ... and you are indeed funny together (even if you don't remember to finish each other's sentences). Congratulations on making it to the Top 55, and I hope to see you on the air!

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    Andrea K. 0  posted 4 years ago

    This project is looking pretty good, the show makes me thing of the movie Super Troopers but with campus guards instead of highway patrolmen.

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    Lorelei P. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Campus Law has just become one of my favorite projects on here! The chemistry you guys have is awesome and the comedy just oozes

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    Laura M. 0  posted 4 years ago

    This show is one of my favourites! It's a good concept and the guys are funny and have a good chemistry together. Campus Law will definitely have a younger audience. Good luck team!

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    Matt F. 0  posted 4 years ago

    You guys obviously have great chemistry together and you are very clearly funny guys. The footage looked top notch too. You have experience, and I think that'll help you! Keep up the good work!

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    Taylor I. 0  posted 4 years ago

    I am a big fan of this show. I really do hope you guys make it into the top 15. I've been watching this project from almost the beginning, and I'm really glad to see that you've kept it coming, and that you haven't imploded or something awful. I also appreciate your ability to point to your previous successes without coming across as arrogant.

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    Trikucian J. 0  posted 4 years ago

    This is one of the best shows on the site! The three of you have great chemistry and great style. The graphic art from this project is particularly good, especially the sell sheet from this week's project. I'm looking forward to what you're going to do for next week's "Flip It".

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    Jacob K. 0  posted 4 years ago

    This show is my absolute favorite of them all. You guys have clearly defined characters and charismatic chemistry. Each week all those things get displayed more and I couldn't be more excited this show moving on up. You got this guys!

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    Judy W. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Good concept. Like the videos. Good luck in the next round. Look forward to seeing the next video. Very talented group of people. There are so many talented people out there.

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    Gary G. 1  posted 4 years ago

    It can't hurt the cause to have great media play from the network running the competition! I also really like the beside-the-scenes footage showing Campus Law being made - and all the support you have from Montreal's comedic and film community to get the job done. I'm sincerely hoping to see these three "authority" figures in a variety of scenarios and situations that will take the show above and beyond your average frat comedy. Judging by your sell sheet, those hopes will be met. Respect your authority? Yes, sirs!

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    Robbie C. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Hey Campus Law , Congrats on the top 55 ! I like your concept its a different approach than I've seen so far . Great sell sheet good luck in the top 15 voting - Wharf Rats

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    Joanna b. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Congratulations on making it to the top 55! I've only found you guys this week and just had a chance to watch your last video. It's really all I needed to see- you were funny but informational and you did a great job of selling yourself. Good luck on making it to the top 15!

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    Marshall J. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Hey Campus Law, great media pitch video and sell sheet! It was concise, interesting, funny and showed the amazing dynamic you guys have worked to create between the three of you. I don't have any constructive criticisms there, so I'll stick to our convo about character for my feedback.

    You've done an awesome job at describing what the conflict is for your characters within the show; they want to have fun and live the campus life they crave BUT they also have to take their jobs seriously or be fired (Bike Cops is similar in that aspect). That's awesome conflict: characters being pulled in two opposite directions. My feedback/question is: what is the conflict within each character? Personally I find the most interesting characters are the ones who are conflicted themselves. They say one thing but do another. I see you have three distinct personalities for each character, but what different directions are they being pulled in by themselves? (Hope that makes sense!)

    Keep up the great work. See you boys in the Top 15!

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    Marshall J. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Awesome! I've loved the show concept since the beginning, but this makes me love the characters. Now I know you can follow tons of different story lines based on character conflict. Props on creating great characters!

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    Ryan G. 2  posted 4 years ago

    Great question!

    Without revealing our entire show bible and pilot script, here are a few points that can help flesh them out a little more:

    - Gilroy was a star student athlete throughout his life and usually had things handed to him without having to put in any effort (hence his lack of education). His main struggle is adapting to a new lifestyle where he's not praised by everyone.

    - A lot of what Truman does is founded on whether or not it would make him look good in his father's eyes. His dad is a police officer, and Truman is blind to the fact that his dad is just an awful and corrupt.

    - Fox has always been kind of a weirdo/social outcast. He's just awful at interacting with people, but is set on finding love. He also has kind of a mysterious past- he has certain skills and knowledge that he has no business knowing.

    Hopefully that helps!

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    Katie B. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Good video and optional images. You are putting the effort in, which can't be said for a lot of other videos out there. Good luck with Top 15!

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    Ryan G. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Thanks! We've really been trying to use those optional images to our advantage each week!

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    Elizabeth W. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Best hype video I've seen so far! You guys have great chemistry and the premise of your show is not only original, but has a lot of potential to go in different directions. Great job, can't wait to see more videos!

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    Karin D. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Not a bad job on the hype, your video was pretty informative and this show could be funny. I didn't like the happy/sad faces to match your personalities though. You all are great characters and don't need that crap

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    Ryan G. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Point taken! Thanks for the comment!

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    Michael O. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Hey guys, nice video this week! I wasn't expecting to laugh at the "sentences" gag, but the delivery really sold it. In terms of constructive criticism, I think you did a really wise thing in adding links to your site and Twitter on-screen. Only critique I'd have is that it starts out as a pitch to the media, but ends telling people to vote for you, which kind of loses the initial purpose of the video. Otherwise, really strong stuff. Good luck with the Top 15!

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    Lisa M. 0  posted 4 years ago

    You guys are funny.

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    Don B. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Good hype video! Great balance between setting out the premise of the show, what you hope to do with it, and showing off a little more of what make you as writers and Campus Law as a show unique. Nicely done! I hope you make it through to the new round.

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    jason T. 0  posted 4 years ago

    good job guys. You can tell you have a lot of talent and experience to bring to this competition. This video showcased your personalities and your talent well. This idea is cool, although not completely original.

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    Brian E. 0  posted 4 years ago

    I definitely see the chemistry and I love it. Strong concept and I can see that it's a strong team behind it. I am disappointd that my name isn't Richard though. Would've freaked out. Good luck!

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    John F. 0  posted 4 years ago

    This sounds like an interesting concept and should prove to be very interesting. This show will likely attract a big audience and should do very well.

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    Katy R. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Nice work, obviously you're super comfortable working with eachother. Now I wish my name could be Richard, I feel so left out!

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    Don C. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Well done you guys. You seem very at ease in front of the camera, filming was good, sound was great too. I understood very well your project. Great job you guys. Best of luck!

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    Ron T. 0  posted 4 years ago

    good job this week you guys. this video stuck with the theme of your show nicely and it showcased your more serious side. you are a talented bunch and have a lot going for you. good luck in the coming weeks. your sell sheet was good too.

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    Boxcar Dan V. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Great video guys! That Richard line was solid gold. You obviously have great chemistry as a team and are very funny guys. I get a real "Old School" meets "Super Troops" vibe from your videos and I like! Cheers, keep up the good work, and do a keg stand for me!!

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    Virginia S. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Like your show. Its funny and witty. Have been looking though most of the groups and can understand why you rate here. Good job and good luck.

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    Aurora G. 0  posted 4 years ago

    I think it's genius how you started this video with the CBC clip. I can't wait to see more from you guys. Every week you show us your originality and your talent. Good luck!

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    Peter S. 0  posted 4 years ago

    I really liked how this video complements your other missions. You've had slick productions, thoughtful cinematography, and now you show that you're three down-to-earth friends with a lot of experience together. I thought it was a great choice. I loved the sense of humour in this video.

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    Shandi S. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Those optional images and sell sheets are fantastic. This video may have been your best yet too. I'll have to look up some of your sketch stuff one of these days.

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    Madi N. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Congratulations on making it to the Top 55 and good luck on making it to the Top 15!! Keep up the good work!

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    Cathy B. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Always hard to tell from the short clip what your show would be about but it was very well done in letting us know what you are about. I like the premise and look forward to seeing more. good Luck this week

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    Bernie M. 0  posted 4 years ago

    It is my understanding that the fans will decide who gets into the top 15 in the comedy coup competition. so good luck.

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    Grace S. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Another great video, good job! I wish the characters were a bit more diverse - I feel like you're all playing the dumb/naive jock role, which is funny but might grow stale over the course of a season.

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    Natalia H. 0  posted 4 years ago

    You guys are really funny and your videos are all great! Reminiscent of Super Troopers, which is still one of my favourite movies.

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    Kelley S. 0  posted 4 years ago

    I really liked this and its real. So many people still try to hold on to their youth and never let go. Kudos to this. You were clear on what your story is about and didn't leave me in the dark like some others. Congrats and good luck.

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    Chris S. 0  posted 4 years ago

    It is hard to engage with this and with this contest. It is a sign of the internet age I guess that nobody has a clue how this is going to work.

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    Nancy W. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Love the hype, guys! I know you'll make it to the top and go from 'on-line' to 'on-screen". Best of luck.

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    Katie J. 0  posted 4 years ago

    I don't really like this show too typical boy humour for me but if that's still hip then you probably stand a good chance. But good luck with your upcoming missions.

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    Ian B. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Great job on the video, guys! As mentioned, you can tell there is a good chemistry between the actors, and the premise sounds too good. Hope to see you in the top 15!

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    Katie T. 0  posted 4 years ago

    I always like the music in your videos but I think your first video, the show teaser, was the best. I think you guys will make it to top 15.

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    Patrick C. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Who would win in a fight between Campus Law and Bike Cops? Or would you prefer to make love instead? These are just two of the many questions I've wondered while watching and enjoying your weekly videos.

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    Lisa B. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Great team. You can see you well connected you are. But, personally I don't think the whole college life idea would hold my interest.Sorry...

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    Mark P. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Great job guys. Great to see some behind the scenes action. Looks like you have a lot of fun making this show. Looking forward to seeing more! Good luck in the vote this weekend!

    Mark
    -Infinite Possibilities-

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    Alex C. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Fantastic video, you hit the nail for balancing comedy hype with informative, I want to see this show make the top fifteen! hilarious concept!

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    Steve G. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Great media pitch video, very professional and funny! It was cool to see the behind-the scenes shots too.

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    Kathy L. 0  posted 4 years ago

    You guys have style but you dilute it with shopworn images like everyone sucking back a beer. Can you be more original?

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    Samuel B. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Yes... yes we can. Help us get into the Top 15 Kathy, and we'll show you how original we can be!

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    Lauren M. 0  posted 4 years ago

    I was skeptical about this project. I didn't think it would be that great and I avoided watching it until now. My mistake. I'm not one hundred percent sold, but I think the team is solid and I can't wait to see more.

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    Samuel B. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Well Lauren, I'm glad you eventually found your way to watching our stuff! Glad you gave us a chance!

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    Julia S. 0  posted 4 years ago

    This video was really great! Very informative and I like your guys style - natural comedic abilities in all of you. Keep up the good work and good luck

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    Julie P. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Great job guys :)

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    Karen H. 0  posted 4 years ago

    I am definitely going to come down to McLean's on Sunday for a pint. I will be really fun to meet you crazy guys!! Your show idea is truly funny.

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    Samuel B. 0  posted 4 years ago

    See you there Karen!

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    Emilee G. 2  posted 4 years ago

    These guys are in my top 5 favourites. They are hilarious, experienced and super talented. Their ideas are great and the chemistry and timing really comes across. Keep it up guys!

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    Jon W. 0  posted 4 years ago

    So, at least I get to see you guys doing new stuff once a week somewhere. . . digging this though. SHARE AND FAVE #BahdingForever

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    Amir C. 1  posted 4 years ago

    Super funny stuff guys! Really hope you guys make it to top 15. Do check us out here at http://comedycoup.cbc.ca/mapleu
    Perhaps we can integrate Campus Law with Maple U... ;)

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    Andrew B. 0  posted 4 years ago

    I see the foundations of there Peter Pan style characters struggling to avoid life after school yet I'm still a little skeptical about how much I would like the show. I'm probably being a bit picky but wouldn't campus police be basically fired for fraternizing with students? I know, suspend disbelief and what not but I can't, I just can't.

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    Ryan G. 1  posted 4 years ago

    Ah, if only we could share the script with you!

    It's tough to elaborate on all points as much as we'd like to in a 90-second video, but your point definitely fits in with what we tried to summarize with their "delusion" that this is the perfect job. If they want students to like them, they need to be very cool and lenient about the school's rules and regulations... but if they want to keep their jobs, they'll need to strictly enforce them. It's a Catch-22 that absolutely comes into play in the full-length project. Thanks for your comment!

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    Paul S. 0  posted 4 years ago

    great job on the sell sheet and also the video. It brings all the points across and this looks to be a really fun series.

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    Ryan G. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Thanks Paul!

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    Jas J. 1  posted 4 years ago

    I'm sorry, you'll have to do this video again; I couldn't make out a damn word through all the handsomeness. I'm assuming the words you used were good, but just do them uglier next time. In all seriousness, I wish you guys luck: you've got some talent in your corner, and I think lots of people are going to find the premise infectious.

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    Ryan G. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Currently punching each other in the face to be uglier in this week's video. Thanks for your support!

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    Sarah D. 1  posted 4 years ago

    This was a really great video guys, it looks super interesting and funny. I liked how you pitched your show at the same time as pitching yourselves and your ability to keep things funny for viewers (and execs!) Great pitch.

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    Ryan G. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Thanks Sarah, we did our best to pitch n' please!

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    Jon F. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Great job. I am happy to support this project. Good luck making it to the next round. #HypeIt #ComedyCoupHype #BeHyperactive #100Characters

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    Ryan G. 0  posted 4 years ago

    #ThanksForYourCommentThatWasReallyNiceOfYou

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    Melanie T. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Awesome work so far. I think this show has some serious potential. MMS has proven themselves as entertainers on youtube with their quality shorts and I am excited to see what they'd bring to the small screen with a half hour long show!

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    Ryan G. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Aw shucks Melanie. Thanks!

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    Brian L. 3  posted 4 years ago

    You guys have me in stitches. And as a medical doctor I know a thing or two about stitches.

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    Taylor G. 1  posted 4 years ago

    Great work. You guys continue to produce great quality vids with professional grade quality. Really looking forward too seing more!

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    Jason B. 1  posted 4 years ago

    All your videos are well done and you clearly have a good grasp on what you want to do. Good luck in the next round of voting!

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    Johanna D. 1  posted 4 years ago

    Very professional. You guys obviously know your stuff. Great sell sheet too! Can't wait to see a more episode-like video to get back to the main funny business. :)

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    Edward T. 1  posted 4 years ago

    You guys continue to do a great job on your videos. Your experience really shows in your production and marketing. My only concern would be your audience. Your show seems suited towards a younger audience

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    Kellie G. 1  posted 4 years ago

    Can't wait to see more...Good luck x

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    Alyssa O. 1  posted 4 years ago

    As always great job, leaves me wanting to see what you will say next week, I like how every week we get to know you a little bit more :)

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    Ryan H. 1  posted 4 years ago

    Good job folks, I always enjoy your videos. Looks like you guys are having a great time. I'm curious to see what you come up with next week.

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    Dylan I. 2  posted 4 years ago

    God damn guys, your video and sell sheet are awesome. This is one of the most polished projects in the competition.

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    Kara G. 1  posted 4 years ago

    You guys are hilarious, great job on answering the mission while keeping it funny! When the new missions come out each week I watch you guys in the first few I click on. I really enjoy the way you put together your videos too I like the behind the scenes shots of filming that you incorporated this week. I also think that highlighting your previous success was a good strategy in this weeks mission to show your fans what you have done.

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    Christina O. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Great video, you really explained your concept well. I bet the experience of making viral videos helps as you can perhaps get the sense of what the general population likes. Also, good job on getting the two radio press casts.

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    RASHTA K. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Fantastic! As usual! Well done on the hype video. I definitely cant wait to see more! Excited for the events this Thursday online and Sunday at Mcleans Pub. I'm sure you guys are as charming as you seem on screen. You've got my votes!

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    Maïté S. 0  posted 4 years ago

    I like the tone of that one. Your project is well presented and there is a really charming aspect to it. I didn't laugh but I smiled and I really enjoyed you guys attitude . Good luck for the rest of comedy .

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    Alexandra M. 0  posted 4 years ago

    LMFAO....Richard, I expect a comment....You guys REALLY do vibe well together. There are a great many possibilities to be explored with your concept here. I expect to see you in the top 15 ;)

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    Michael W. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Good sell from lots of experience.
    Didn't work for me
    Sorry

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    Sheldon O. 0  posted 4 years ago

    Was that an actual news story right at the beginning, if so great job, your well ahead with the media themed mission already!! Video seemed really well put together and had some good laughs. Good luck with your youtube and in-person events this week.

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    Jennifer D. 1  posted 4 years ago

    Good Job

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    Angela P. 1  posted 4 years ago

    Good job, Richard ;)
    A

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    carly t. 1  posted 4 years ago

    good job guys.

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    Liz P. 1  posted 4 years ago

    I like the Style and Tone section of you sell sheet; it gave me a sense of where you would take Campus Law to make it different -and funny. Not sure the rest of the sell sheet or your video added too much more than what I've learned about your project from the first four weeks' projects, though. I do like your sense of timing.

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    Darcy W. 5  posted 4 years ago

    Great job again this week guys! Your years of experience and production value is evident each week and I love the show concept! Nothing really constructive to say other than show me more! Hopefully see you on the other side next week!
    Darcy - WingMom.ca

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